Thursday, 11 February 2016

Narrative writing

once upon time there was Boy could Zack and his sister Abbey.  They were trying to find are bull shark until  abbey saw are great white shark. abbey said we are all going to die Zack start shouting Help Help.

As later on the night went there mother  and father got worried and went out on dad's boat to find them they looked and looked but they couldn't find them until sally could hear are voice they went south west they could hear they saw Zack and Abbey they jump in the boat and where happy ley ever after

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